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- Fri, 28 Jun 2019 10:00:14 EST 1Db9Em0A No.739479
File: 1561730414483.jpg -(281124B / 274.54KB, 1200x1200) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size. i'm making a videogame
i'll keep you posted

maybe
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hello - Fri, 28 Jun 2019 11:58:15 EST Yl+O1UI3 No.739483 Reply
any cute dogs in your game? My game, Maryjane & Keef 2: Ahayuasca Odyssey is gonna have qt doggos. If your game ain't got qt dogs then don't even bother making it cause my game's gonna SLAM your game in the box office mkay
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Zangief - Fri, 28 Jun 2019 20:37:54 EST 1PRipo9X No.739501 Reply
Oh yeah? Well I've just decided to make my own game that will be 10 times better than yours, with real time voxel tracing, ray physics, 80fps, aliasing, shadowed zones, 6 GHz flop processing, and more than 256 colors. Good luck, chump.
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James Sunderland - Fri, 28 Jun 2019 21:06:34 EST Eo5DoyQp No.739502 Reply
>>739501
oh shit dude, 6ghz floppy processing? Can I play it on my gameboy color?
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Fleurette - Fri, 28 Jun 2019 21:16:29 EST vC086bC2 No.739503 Reply
Yeah well I'm making a game that doesn't involve dog fucking at all, which already makes it better than yours
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Radical Rex - Fri, 28 Jun 2019 23:44:34 EST noL7S+Qv No.739507 Reply
holy shit all those pics in OP image, all combined into one mega pic, lmao wow
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Jago - Fri, 28 Jun 2019 23:48:57 EST spJMC5K8 No.739508 Reply
yeah? well, I'm making BAD LIFE CHOICES
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Darkstalker Kaathe - Sat, 29 Jun 2019 10:51:03 EST 1Db9Em0A No.739537 Reply
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>>739491
not yet, the artist i commisioned should give it to me soon tho
enjoy this unfinished sketch of a cat man tho
>>739503
get out of my thread you dog hater piece of shit motherfucker
>>739508
AH, I'M 10 STEPS AHEAD OF YOU
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Sofia Lamb - Sun, 30 Jun 2019 07:19:25 EST 1Db9Em0A No.739581 Reply
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still working on it
have this picture from an older project in the meantime
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Cecil Harvey - Mon, 01 Jul 2019 00:00:05 EST jfMnf+re No.739601 Reply
>>739479
>That consistent look of utter despair that you've made it yet another year without killing yourself because you're too much of a pussy.

This image defines me and everything about me.
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Cammy - Mon, 01 Jul 2019 05:42:05 EST ChBr6wsk No.739614 Reply
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Is it as good as this one?
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Scott Shelby - Mon, 01 Jul 2019 06:34:54 EST 1Db9Em0A No.739615 Reply
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>>739588
it's not even the same engine lmao
>>739613
no, but now that i think of it, i should make a videogame about a penguin
>>739614
i can't guarantee it
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Jame Soloman - Tue, 02 Jul 2019 07:58:15 EST KPChXmhP No.739665 Reply
>>739614
Those are some fucking nice bed sheet graphics.
What's that game?
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Calypso - Tue, 02 Jul 2019 10:09:53 EST 1Db9Em0A No.739675 Reply
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still working on it
have a screenshot, graphics are very lame as of now
(and they won't improve that much by the time of release, i'm not good at this "graphics" thing and i don't have the kinda money to commision a 3d artist)
but it's far from a finished version
oh well, see ya
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Sazh Katzroy - Tue, 02 Jul 2019 15:26:33 EST xjegnWGl No.739685 Reply
>>739665
That's a still render you putz. If that's from a game it's going to be some stupid graphic novel style slideshow bullshit.
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Big Boss - Wed, 03 Jul 2019 04:38:55 EST 1Db9Em0A No.739724 Reply
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>>739721
have another one

artist is still not responding
she's busy with studies so whatever but i really need to replace these ugly ass placeholders i made
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Ignatio Mobius - Wed, 03 Jul 2019 04:45:54 EST A0EiJyuw No.739725 Reply
>>739675
>myo hassa

sounds weaby and that's gonna suck, if it's not weaby it might be okay though
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Alexandra Roivas - Wed, 03 Jul 2019 22:19:43 EST M8doybBl No.739755 Reply
>>739724
This happens all the time. Artists and other devs get really busy.
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Clank - Thu, 04 Jul 2019 04:51:41 EST 1Db9Em0A No.739773 Reply
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>>739755
oh, i'm not upset or anything, well i am not because she's busy but because i need to put a ton of dialogue in the game and the current sprites i have are horrible to look at
but thats whatever, since loading times will be longish (but few and far in between thank god) i decided to put more expository monologues to kill time and add character to the protagonist
even the 2d graphics are terrible but i can fix that when i have time
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Clank - Fri, 05 Jul 2019 07:12:22 EST 1Db9Em0A No.739832 Reply
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today i'm taking a break
not because the schedule i'm following is tiring, far, far from it, but because i feel like utter shit
i feel like those mozzarellas ive eat yesterday were expired and i didnt notice
meanwhile have another screenshot, since i got nothing else to show
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Ryu Hoshi - Sat, 06 Jul 2019 09:45:02 EST 1Db9Em0A No.739893 Reply
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>>739874
thanks man!!!
today i finished working on the skeleton of the third level
i plan on publishing a demo in the near future
but first a lot of shit needs to be polished
and i also wanna make another level
no idea yet of the concept but i'll get there eventually
one of my teeth hurts
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Dr. Eggman - Sat, 06 Jul 2019 14:27:22 EST KfzcRa3S No.739901 Reply
>>739893
Dont want to discourage you, but no one gives a fuck you almost made a level, and that shit looks way too awful to be shown even to your mother, not to mention online, and youll regret posting your journal even if you manage to make a shitty game.
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Ryu Hoshi - Sat, 06 Jul 2019 14:38:14 EST 1Db9Em0A No.739902 Reply
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>>739901
i dunno, that seems like an attempt at discouraging to me
i've already made multiple projects before this one, not really regretting it rn, feedback wasm't too bad either for what little i got, i'm sure i'll be fine
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The Horned Reaper - Sat, 06 Jul 2019 15:26:29 EST UYHgL+9d No.739903 Reply
>>739902
Just discouraging you from clogging up the board with your journal cause you seem like someone expecting a high five every time you do something.
By all means keep working hard on your skills and I wish you many great games.
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Ryu Hoshi - Sat, 06 Jul 2019 15:59:23 EST 1Db9Em0A No.739904 Reply
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>>739903
thats a fairer criticism
i really don't expect "high fives" but i see why someone would think that way looking at the thread
it's really more of me to keep loosely track of what i do so plus the minimal chance that someone might wanna ask any question or show intrest to see for myself how i'd react
by any means i'm open to discuss any criticism, not that there's much to see anyway at least now to begin with
i'll probably keep this thread alive for a more few days out of habit if anything but now i kinda see i'm not getting too much out of it, regardless of how people would respond
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Amaterasu - Wed, 10 Jul 2019 02:56:38 EST YjmB35Or No.740068 Reply
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and now i'm back again with my epic unwarranted blogging
couldn't work too much on the game these days due to illness and general stress, BUT the person i commisioned is starting to deliver the art
i personally find him adorable
i also finally upgraded my internet so i can livestream myself modeling against a crowd of like 2 close people that follow my super secret youtube channel
no real reason to do so other than the social pressure of someone watching makes me less lazy
oh well, see ya next time
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Dregs - Wed, 10 Jul 2019 13:45:31 EST qrPHyWe8 No.740087 Reply
>>739773
ftfy OP you were mixing tenses and writing like a child.

I just had a dream. I was on the beach with an old friend, a girl I hadn't seen in more than a decade. We were walking on the beach, and out of the blue she lifted her shirt and showed me her breasts. They were much larger than I remember, or at least her clothing never made them look that big. And of course, that's the moment I'm awoken by a strange smell.

I tried to relax, go back to sleep, and continue the dream. Trying to continue a dream almost never works, but this time it did. We were back on the beach, her naked body already glistening in the sun. Just as she was about to sit on my face, the smell returned. It was putrid. I gagged and puked uncontrollably all over her ass.

That's when I woke up again. Covered in my real vomit. Remembering I've been kidnapped. And the smell is the rotting corpses of my deceased team mates. Fuck.
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Ivy Valentine - Wed, 10 Jul 2019 21:41:37 EST YjmB35Or No.740107 Reply
>>740087
this reads like something wrote by someone who's (whose?) first language is not english, no offense

i know a thing or two about that, since it isn't my first language either

>>740097
i deserve it
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Dregs - Wed, 10 Jul 2019 22:54:54 EST qrPHyWe8 No.740109 Reply
>>740107
If it sounds that way, it's because you wrote it. I only edited the errors out and made the text flow better. I'm a native english speaker and graduated high school with a 92% average, by the way. I've written essays in 5 minutes while drunk and still received perfect scores.

Other than the sentence fragments intentionally placed at the end for dramatic effect, the edit I did is correct. It also flows better when you don't use dialogue to explain something that can be narrated because you originally used a first person perspective.
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Princess Zelda - Wed, 10 Jul 2019 23:26:09 EST Tz952UMq No.740111 Reply
>>740109
>If it sounds that way, it's because you wrote it. I only edited the errors out and made the text flow better. I'm a native english speaker and graduated high school with a 92% average, by the way. I've written essays in 5 minutes while drunk and still received perfect scores.
>7/10
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Zoe Castillo - Wed, 10 Jul 2019 23:45:21 EST B2H25YqR No.740113 Reply
>>740111
They're right, though. Their version is pretty much grammatically flawless. What's written in that screenshot sounds like it would narrated by fuckin' Tommy Wiseau.

Unless that's what you were going for, but we both know you weren't.
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Zits - Thu, 11 Jul 2019 02:48:55 EST Zj68SaXX No.740116 Reply
>>739773
>>740087

Fuck this bitch, the majority of English speakers in the world did not learn it as a first language. People who have English as their mother's tongue and those who don't intermingle indiscriminately with the aid of the internet producing a written language through lowest common denominator. In the same way Roman was the lingua franca of its day, English is now and it will inevitably shatter into different languages in time; our prime examples being British and American English.

My point is: If she understood what you were trying to say she needn't correct you.
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Dregs - Thu, 11 Jul 2019 03:48:06 EST qrPHyWe8 No.740118 Reply
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>>740116
All I did was fix the text so that English readers don't think the game was written by a 14 year old. It's a valid criticism, unless you think it's okay that somebody set up us the bomb.
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Zits - Thu, 11 Jul 2019 04:45:12 EST Zj68SaXX No.740119 Reply
>>740118

I would argue that game being a topic in this thread, in itself, is an argument against your criticism. The reason anyone remembers that game is because of the accidental genius of the translation.

Not saying your criticism is invalid though. Without criticism no one would appreciate the absurdity of the quote and so its memory wouldn't be cherished.

I enjoy people being passionate about things. I encourage that. Maybe you enjoy critizing, if so, by all means continue but critique is subject to critique aswell.
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Ivy Valentine - Thu, 11 Jul 2019 06:48:32 EST YjmB35Or No.740125 Reply
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>>740109
i don't want the conversation to turn into something more aggressive, but i think you're missing the point on why the text is written the way it is
if i made some grammar mistakes, and i'm sure i did, i'll double check later, thank you for trying to correct them, but your interpretation, other than straight up changing some of the facts described for reasons i don't understand, suffers from a stilted pace and overly verbose vocabulary, both things that can be perfectly fine in many other contexts, but the idea here is to represent in a colloquial manner the slow, incoherent train of thought of a man after he just woke up
a man who just woke up from a weird dream does not communicate with himself using words such as "glistening" is all i'm trying to say here

it's not that the substance of your version is bad, it's that it's not compatible with what its intended purpose is

>>740113
it actually was

now that we got this out of the way (well not really, if you wanna continue the discussion i'm all ears) girl has brought me another unfinished drawing
its supposed to be a washed out man in drag but i think its too feminine
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Princess Zelda - Thu, 11 Jul 2019 13:15:53 EST Tz952UMq No.740139 Reply
>>740112
I take shits on paper and get 95%+ in my masters program on my grades. Let’s see you top that.
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Capt. Falcon - Thu, 11 Jul 2019 22:34:19 EST L4rzWM1T No.740155 Reply
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>Watch the Imperials execute an innocent man
>Not on the list
>Decides to execute you anyways
>Torture rooms everywhere
>No Talos worship
>Filthy elf puppets
>Joins the Imperials

Are you some kind of retard?
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Katt Monroe - Fri, 12 Jul 2019 05:07:14 EST bSOuYLgN No.740164 Reply
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wow i leave you guys alone for one second and this happens
either way, yesterday was the most productive i've been in a long time, drew and fully textured a whole map+fixed many bugs, feels good man
commissioned artist sent me another art but it looked bleh so she'll have to work on it for another while
also she corrected the drag man so thats that

now excuse me but i'll have to take care of incredibly important things such as playing mortal kombat armageddon for 10 hours in a row
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Super Meat Boy - Fri, 12 Jul 2019 22:13:52 EST FEAXip+M No.740191 Reply
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>>740183
You think everyone who post an anime reaction is Four?

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